Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Half-Forgotten Love Affair Comments

Rating: 2.8

Clouds catching shadows on the ground,
while the winds are careful not to make a sound.
Dancing waters in the night...
Oh, how that splendor filled my sight!
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

half dead half alive love relation...still the once joyous feels never fully die out... they 'make waters dance in the night'...'make birds catch lost dreams in the sea'! good piece, Jane...the tension over strained love life is very beautifully poetized here...10

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