Saturday, July 27, 2019

Half Done Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unmet debt, and left out forest fire,
Left alive foes when new life acquire
Prevail time and again,
Proving perennial pain,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

Half-done is whole headache, life time's ire. Bring to end what's begun, Never leave it half-done, ......so true. Half-done mustn't be left behind, A beautiful poem with nice theme is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Thanks for reading the ditty and liking it, dear poet KM.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 July 2019

" Half- hearted steps may sink men in mire" A meaningful thought provoking limerick. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Thanks indeed RM for appreciating this one.

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