Wednesday, June 28, 2017

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Rating: 4.8

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Gone up in the attic oft
Mountain pores and love gardens
aloft
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Aabid Masroor
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Richard Wlodarski 07 August 2017

A marvelous ode to nature! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 August 2017

It must be love! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Seamus O Brian 07 August 2017

This is my first exposure to your work, and I am pleased to have the opportunity to enjoy it. You write bravely, confident in your expression. You are the high-wire, tight rope artist with no net, unafraid to execute your craft. Very vibrant imagery, very dynamic punctuations of color and internal texture. Rhyming schemes of contemporary writing always invoke within me a gestalt of cautious skepticism, as so many modern writers sacrifice precision of thought for mechanical rhyming structure, but the scaffolding of your rhyme and rhythm enhance the visuals, rather than detracting from them, realizing our otherwise frequently disappointed hope. Bravo, good poet. :) S

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Rini Shibu 07 August 2017

Beautifully described on nature and love Congratulations

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary. Beautiful poem on nature with stunning expression. Thanks and congratulations for the poem of the day.

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Unwritten Soul 07 August 2017

Aabid, you did it again....this is your third or fouth to be selected poem of the day from member right? Thats awesome...for sure you deserve this, you wrote a beautiful poem, and all of your collection really beautiful..Keep writing and inspired my friend...either good or bad, turn it something into great value at the end! Congrats again.

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Tom Allport 07 August 2017

a lovely descriptive poem of the power of love always finding a way to blossom in the most hostile circumstances? ...................well written AM..

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 June 2017

A great static and animated imagery. Thanks

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2017

Very beautifully done Aabid, told u before ;)

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Gajanan Mishra 28 June 2017

whitye so brioght, calm moonlight

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