Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Half Crying Half Laughing Comments

Rating: 4.5

It rained along with sunshine
A scene I never saw before
Heavy drops fell on the mud
I heard the thud
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Afzal Shauq 09 November 2010

But blood but soul Mud is all thirsty again Scorching sun is burning with glow Brightening again with full dignity And rain cannot last mighty suns glare sweet way written poem with meaningful idea and the way you you have done is wonderfully professional and heart feeling.. well done..you deserve to get 10/10 +++++

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