Monday, October 7, 2019

Half Buried Comments

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The earth was shaken and cracked,
He is half buried in in the open jaws
Of the angry earth that trembled,
Reminding him of all his flaws,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 October 2019

AS USUAL UR UNIQUE SIR WHO AM I A QUESTION NO HUMAN CAN ANSWER BUT WE ALL ARE NEURONS ASK ANY MODERN NEUROSURGEON ATOMS OR ATMA BOTH ORIGINATED FROM SANSKRIT ONE HINDI THE OTHER ENGLISH WHICH IS WHICH SOUL IS SIMPLY MAGNETISM ASK ANY MEDICO HOW THEY TAKE M R I

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 October 2019

Wow, I love this poem. A beautiful story of great repentance. A wonderful universal message that should be read by everyone for peace and unity. Beautifully crafted. Onto my Poem List.

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