Thursday, September 29, 2005

Half A World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Half a world
Away
That moon is steady
Marching on
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Kelly Vinal
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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 September 2005

Mahnaz, I am drawn with you. This is so uncluttered and calm. Hope you keep safe over there. Best wishes H

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David Gerardino 29 September 2005

NICE POEM..................................like the ending...

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 29 September 2005

A very sad, calm, sweet poem....nice. There's something that draws me to it.

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

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