Haiti's Pain Comments

A sad story of deprivation told in good diction with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

poignancy is palpable

Thoughtful words on the disaster that happened in Haiti. I hope and pray for things to return to normal for the Haitians.

Tell them to listen noted British Jew singer Amy Winehouse's -number-'Tears dry on their own'--there will not be any length, breadth or height of Haiti's pain-there will be joy forever.10+

Tell them to listen noted British Jew singer Amy Winehouse's -number-'Tears dry on their own'--there will not be any length, breadth or height of Haiti's pain-there will be joy forever.

GOD, works in mysterious ways. Beyond our mortal understanding.

I could feel the pain too.It's a tragedy, indeed.

Damn you beat me to it, I have been trying to write something about the terrible devastation in haiti but am still working on it, this is a fine poem Gillena and I think an important one aswell, well done.

Well express good write....10s

nice simile Mouths opened, hearts opened; Like sieves their tears flow; very well written symbolistic poem 10/10

Inspirational...., good work....! ! !

Lifted and the half dead, Eased out to eat dust; Dust, that feeds life in A war zone of the mythical ones; Elephant bearers who shifted; .................most poignant yet humanistic, by cries of innocence, heart when desiccates in crowds by the disasters, wonderful write by painful tears, well done,10+++, thanks for sahring

wow so sweet and impressive poem about haiti state..hmmmm loved it and enjoyed alot..10/10

Wow, stark imagery. I think you've done justice to Haiti's state of desperation. Would that it were not so, but a good job of portraying it in an original way.