Sunday, January 8, 2017

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My dreams...
I've waited...for my dreams...to...come true
Will those...fleeting thoughts...make...me blue
Is my subconscious...planning...a coup
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Jeremy Horsford
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Bud Taylor 08 January 2017

Uncertainty abounds, yet heaven surronds when uplifting moments of thoughtful renown as this poem astounds! I found this poem very personal and difficult to comment so i delved into a harmless rhyme. Well written, well penned

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Jeremy Horsford 08 January 2017

Hey Bud, it definitely seems personal, however I'm in a happy loving relationship. Maybe there is apart of me which is forever sad (which isn't necessarily a bad thing) . And that's probably where all of my sad poetry is borne.

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