Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Haircut Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

I prayed to the devil I prayed to the god
With scissors they were cut, that was mightier then a sword,
I Look like a school boy, I look so fkcin small
Like the end of rome, my hairs did fall
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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

haircut............one of the worst nightmares for a school child.........

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 January 2014

You are wonderful........Kanav...............a trivial thing it may look like but with your poetry it is dazzling with life.........

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Heather Wilkins 11 November 2013

I feel good after a hair cut. makes me feel fresh and lite, a good write

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Lyn Paul 31 October 2013

I never thought you guys worried about hair but great that you do

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Bri Edwards 21 December 2012

kanav, is that why your hair hardly makes it into your photo on poemhunter? i used to have fairly short hair, but due to my newest wife's wishes my hair is quite long (and gray...not her wish necessarily) , especially in the back; she has trimmed the sides and front a few times. i really liked the comparison of your falling hair with rome. bri

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 December 2012

I always feel that way after a hair cut. I'm smiling to myseff.

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Hans Vr 01 December 2012

I recognise very much the agony. I think many of us have gone through something like this Being much older now, and having lost so many of my hairs all this agony looks a bit funny now. Enjoy your short haircut as much as you enjoyed your long hairs It is just a choice: we can fret about or just go on can count our blessings Excellent poem, a very poetic expression of a simple life event

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Dave Walker 29 November 2012

Really like this a fantastic poem.

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A B 29 November 2012

haha good one....yep a changed face is obvious with a haircut

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Neela Nath Das 28 November 2012

So beautiful! I loved the simile you used here! Kudos!

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