Hair Raising Comments

A very good interior monologue that had me hooked. What a colourful narrator too. I liked the reference to Burnt Norton, which also coloured the poem by alluding to the section in Little gidding where the narrator meets the ghost of an old mentor. A nice twist at the end too.

Terrific... do you read FORTEAN TIMES?

I don't know what you're eating, but your poems are getting better and better. This one is outstanding. When I read about the movement from black & white to color to digital and 'who picked up your digi-cam that night and photographed your dreams? ' I was smiling.

Witty and hugely enjoyable, Michael, a winning combination. Jimmy