Monday, July 27, 2009

' ' ' ' ' Hailstones And Bumblebees(Tankas For Imogen) Comments

Rating: 2.7

Dead bee in her hand
lovely furry miracle.
'No buzz buzz! ' she weeps
enormous tears plop on bee
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 07 August 2009

'Now – only doll wide awake gazing at her sleeping child.' - I like the whole cycle - the tankas sound ike little cradle-songs, very sweet, with nice dose of magic, bees and miracles like in the childish world or in the folklore songs. I imagined the doll gazing at her sleeping child - its weird beautiful...

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Original Unknown Girl 29 July 2009

This is beautiful, or rather... these are beautiful. Strange how you mention the sun hitting the pavestones. Imogen often mentions how heavy raindrops look like butterflies dancing - how wonderful you penned those... thank you. HG: -) xx

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Carol Gall 27 July 2009

perfect title for this very enjoyable

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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