Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Haikus (The Women) Comments

Rating: 4.7

The green paddy fields,
In the hearts of eves
Are divine secrets.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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Sandra Martyres 10 October 2009

Highly imaginative pieces Naseer...liked them all.10

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Louis Rams 09 October 2009

each one is a story in itself. gr8888t write a ten

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I like the differences between all these women and once again they are so imaginative and creative haikus. Really unique too! 10 love Karin

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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

women on your dreams...or is it dreams on your women? very much imaginative haiku strips...thanks...10

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Sandra Fowler 08 October 2009

Your pen praises women with subtle grace and sensitivity. Thank you for your lovely art. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sahar Sahar 08 October 2009

Poems Projecting the rights of woman, her important role in the society........

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 October 2009

Well composed. Nice style of imaginary.

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Raj Nandy 08 October 2009

VERY INSPIRING HAIKUS! THANKS FOR SHARING! -Raj

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Mamta Agarwal 08 October 2009

i can see a haiku moment in all. you have captured women from different perspectives- beauty, mystery, ageing, frolicking. Naseer each is a gem. there is sense of wonder, sadness, admiration- your inner eye didn't miss anything. please post some more. i notice you don't follow traditional 5,7,5 syllables. THanks Mamta

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Patrick A. Martin 07 October 2009

they are all beautifully descriptive. Each one its own unique piece of art.10

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Carol Gall 07 October 2009

.......like this one 10...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 October 2009

lovely haikus the different facets of woman

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Rehana Nazli 07 October 2009

The multiple facets of the picture of a woman, expressed beautifully in this poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 October 2009

Captures many angles of a womans being

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