Sunday, May 29, 2016

Haikus Of Sadness Comments

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Spring's breezes gently pass
On the Indus bank
You are not with me, alas!
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Zulfiqar Ali Bhatti
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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2016

If you keep feeling it, maybe you have to find something that make u feel content the more you think the more u feel...otherwise you can just change the way you thinl The haikus you wrote just good as the emotional almost like ours (for readers to feel) Keep it up and be happy.... try to be one

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