Thursday, March 9, 2006

Haikus About A Spouse Comments

Rating: 4.8

She said I write Kitsch
this love of my High School days
I called her a witch.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Raynette Eitel 09 March 2006

Ah, the trials and tribulations of living and loving someone who is not a poet! (and I might add, living with someone who IS a poet.) Good luck to both of you. Raynette

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Raynette Eitel 09 March 2006

Ah, the trials and tribulations of living and loving someone who is not a poet! (and I might add, living with someone who IS a poet.) Good luck to both of you. Raynette

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Linda Hepner 09 March 2006

Have you thought of showing her all the tons of admiring comments you get? And by the way, however logical a woman is, direct romance is hard to resist even when your High School days are long in the past!

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Gina Onyemaechi 09 March 2006

Comedy and cleverness, Herbs, two of your best features. Cracking lines. Sweetly, Gina.

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Mary Nagy 09 March 2006

I think this is funny Herbert. My kids and husband HATE my free verse poems...they feel poetry should rhyme..otherwise, it's just words (write a letter! they say) . It's so funny how our spouses and families view our poetry. Mine enjoy it (I think it's more ''tolerate'' it) but, that's as far as their ''support'' goes. Sincerely, Mary Maybe if you wrote more ''love'' poems about your wife she would get more pleasure out of it! hint, hint. (you know, use her name and make it only about her with clues of her that it couldn't mean any other woman in the world!) :)

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