Haikuli Poetry Lke Haiku Comments

'now a broken creamy dream' - not bad!

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now a broken creamy dream so to me it does seem...... creamy dream on the bed of love screen none can break if that's sticky and intact let the moonlight come to make silhouettes some enjoy the shade in the loving shape let the rain come to wet not the bed but inside mate let the poetic verse pen as haiku and let it dance as disco long long long thru......

I AM IDIOT AND FOOL WHY LIVING IN THIS WORLD PHOLL

I AM AND GROWN OLD, WHO WILL CHALLANGE ME WHO WILL HOLD MY POLE I NEED HOLE I HAVE BIG POLE

See me tonight Happy you'll be.....imagining the image heart carves.