Haiku – Your Path Forward Comments

a question to be seriously that before it's replied.

Though our life may be destined to tale a particular route but with planning and determined action, one can alter the course of things to come. Nice poem. Thanks, Paul.

Pregnant with positivist and impregnated with introspection is this short but significant submission. Well done Paul!

excellent little haiku done in a 6'7'4 format. short, sweet and precise. great job. hopefully i am on the right path now in my life. Regards Tia

it is beautifully planned haiku...excellent.....

Short but great one, keep it up dear

Though I encourage planning, my path is at my feet and not the horizon.

Stretching horizon speaks about imagery here which gives idea of blue sky forever on the way of mind.'s journey. Nice haiku shared....10

Verily, planned actions find the path forward.....10

Sweet! Thanks.. :)

Another nice haiku....I liked it.

smt it seems that everything is already planned by God! or known by Him.