Haiku (You Are With Me) Comments
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Nice haiku on the poem theme. Many relationships lack the required mutual understanding 10+
No body is perfect, one may be partly with you but may not be completely with you.
This story is as old as human kind, very well put Rajnish. We are all looking for connection outside when the only lasting connection is within us. Wonderful haiku. Food for reflection.10
Thank you, Norah, for visiting the poem and sharing your views with regard to its theme.
There is always doubt and confusion in mind. But relationship is pure ever. This is a very beautiful poem shared here.10
You have very nicely reviewed the poem. Thanks a lot, Kumarmani Sir.
An insightful portrayal of intimate strangers, nicely encapsulated from the heart. Brief and lovely.
very common emotion out of the couple's conflicts...indeed a good haiku-10 Thank you Rajnish for all your comments on my poems
I am so glad to receive critical comments on some of my poems from a senior poet like you. These are reassuring as well as inspiring. Thanks a lot, Mdm Indira ji.
stop thoughts - and you will hear God: He's always with you. Out and inside!
Very rightly you highlighted here the very confusing mind of the human being who are always with some apprehensions, questions and doubts. Thanks for sharing.
Yes, this conflict of opposing thoughts leave us often in confusion! Who can say if someone is close to us even if he/she stays so close physically! Great Haiku! As Asim has pointed out, kindly check the middle line which should have only 7 syllables! But rules shouldn't be a great constraint!
Truth of life. Some being nearby doesn't mean he/ she is near. Heart is the real existence. If the heart is far everything far. The body is only an animal.
Verily, contrary thoughts and talk mark human life
Nice piece of work with the muse of your imagination. Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful Haiku.................................................10+++ Please check the second line for syllables.
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7/18/2025 11:25:38 PM # 1.0.0
A puzzle so well portrayed......interesting haiku