Monday, October 22, 2012

Haiku (Ying & Yang) Comments

Rating: 4.0

Internal beauty
devilish hearted angels
both sides intertwine

Fly if stopped in tracks
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Kelvin Owusu
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 October 2012

Ying and Yand make a nice and different feeling inside me. strong love in innocent eyes..this can be related by the eternity...well done my friend.

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Aung Si 23 October 2012

Speaking truthfully, you acquire talent Keep it up!

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Stevens Cadet 22 October 2012

I like your concept of Ying and Yang in this one. Don't know how you came up with this one but it's very creative

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Nader Baheri 22 October 2012

wow.marvelous the best way that u have used Ying and Yang in u r poem when two colors of Ying and Yang become joined, both sides of hearted angels become joined too

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