Wednesday, February 24, 2021

Haiku- X Comments

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in this emptiness
shadow of a moon dances
silence is broken
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2021

The moon always spells magic that holds us spellbound. A wonderful haiku.

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Kostas Lagos 24 February 2021

Silence is broken by the shadow...magnificent

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Gordon Walter 24 February 2021

Even shadow of moon can break the silence. Wow in this emptiness shadow of a moon dances silence is broken

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Suzon Albert 24 February 2021

Awesome haiku with outstanding imagery.

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S H 24 February 2021

What a great imagery for silence, artist of haiku back.

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Varsha M 24 February 2021

Im imagining the tune played in mind as the moon dance advance... breaking the silence lonliness encompasses. Beautiful.

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M. Asim Nehal

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