Sunday, February 20, 2011

Haiku- Winter Comments

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

A lovely heartwarming write!

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Jenny Gordon 04 March 2011

The first line excellently captures the weariness of winter...sounds like a midwest winter! The second line....the days are short and the nights long, ever cold, hence the third line...I do not quite understand the middle line. Very nice haiku on that dead season.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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