Monday, May 20, 2013

Haiku- Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cold keeps coming
as the days heat fades away
bringing winter near
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Lovely write! My favorite time of year!

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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

a nice season haiku makes me feel the winter's chill

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Didith Marcelo 22 May 2013

Nice! Continue writing! It's good to read more. GBY!

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Very good, Allan. Contnue writing and sharing.

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Rajendran Muthiah 21 May 2013

5-75 haiku is excellent., dealing with a simple theme.

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