Saturday, January 8, 2022

Haiku Two: Better Comments

Rating: 5.0

degraded to three
your neck still above waters
you'll never be drowned
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Freeyad Hugo 08 January 2022

It is really a mystery...you are higher than NO 3--I protest!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 January 2022

Thank you for your great support. Allah's Great Blessings

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David Wood 08 January 2022

Interesting Haiku. I wonder how human nature accepts being on the lowest level?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 January 2022

Of course human nature always accepts being on the lowest level IF he/she deserves, BUT if that is the wrong place, WHO decides? Thank you for your caring response, dear David

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