Tuesday, March 7, 2023

Haiku ~ Twins Comments

Rating: 5.0

when clouds drift away
and the moon emerges on
sand turns to silver
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M. Asim Nehal
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Anjandev Roy 09 March 2023

Simply amazing....thank u, dear friend....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 March 2023

Fantastic twins! Loved both of your poems that you have given birth at a time in an idyllic moment!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 March 2023

Asim Very Excellent Haikus Top 5 kudos

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A marvel. Excited by the flow of words… enjoyed

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Juhaina Tumlu 07 March 2023

Class poem when hope fuels faith and desires take over dreams a path towards dawn

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Shreya Hacks 07 March 2023

First one is about Good fortune and the second one about hope/ dreams coming true. Both are marvellous.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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