Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Haiku 'Train' Comments

Rating: 4.5

Freight train clattered by


over a tree lined viaduct-
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 04 November 2014

within a few words the poet created a beautiful poem and when it reads it comes to mind the exact scenery that is going meant in the poem. A train while it goes clattering with may be the branches and leaves of the tree that is hanging nearby the viaduct or over bridge while the beautiful bird in this poem the oriole sings. The characteristic feature depicted in the poem is excellent and I see this poem a marvelous one and so liked it. May be the poet have seen different meanings in his own imagination and beyond the reader's comprehension.

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