a deluxe vacuum cleaner may help.............with the sand. i'm not sure i can help with the 'time thing'. bri :)
I see the sand trickling and moving through the chasms...sometimes settling on a shelf for an eternity then moved along by the wind. A lovely haiku.
A nice selfie with time's grannules of sand. Mam I enjoyed the Haiku. A huge 10++++is not enough. Please read my poem I fall asleep.
time moves on and on. no one can resist its friction. I mean not a single mortal being and inorganic universe. beautiful piece Valsa G
Valsa, this is such a gem. I remember my youth. I remember trying to hold on to that handful of sand....impossible! Time, like those sands, does definitely slip away.
A beautiful snap of eternally existing Time...Thank you Ma'am for the lovely haiku. Regards. Subhas
Your poetic hand is mild upon my senses. Thanks for all do to my perception, mentoress. 10+++
Time goes on forward and so our lifes, but memories last deep inside.. Good one
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10/26/2025 6:07:20 AM # 1.0.0
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