Haiku. Time (5-7-5) Comments

lovely Haiku.. keep writing : )

Yes, time stretches and contracts as well, the most flexible, that science calls relative, a lovely haiku that highlights these facts.

Very nice Haiku..small yet profound

Time, a sprinting steed, is sometimes a brooding sage Swift and slow in turn! ...fine haiku

Time is fleeting but so precious! You have exquisitely penned this Haiku of 17 syllables! You experiment is a great success.....10

Time - sprinting steed and Time as brooding sage.. underful contrast. Beautifully crafted haiku. Thanks.

sometimes tim is fleeting and sometimes it drags. A very good take on time.

This format is the finest of all. A conventional haiku with conviction of time in retrospection!

This is our thinking that sometimes makes time a sprinting steed and sometimes a brooding sage. But again it's time that changes our thinking! Valsa you have selected a very interesting topic A lovely philosophic write.

Swift in move and slow in turn that is how it is - time. Nice lines. Thank you.

Beautiful Haiku Valsa. I loved reading it.

Contrast simply phenomenal and this is the truth of mysterious time.........Valsa......very well composed

Wonderful contrasts - I certainly prefer those moments time is brooding to the charging horse. The horse is too close to Marvell's dismaying metaphor - AND AT MY BACK I ALWAYS HEAR TIME'S WINGED CHARIOT HURRYING NEAR. But we better give that sage some comic literature so he is not always brooding. I have an extra copy of Sterne's TRISTRAM SHANDY which is guaranteed to make the sage smile.

indeed, time's passage is so often colored by our perception.