Thursday, November 13, 2014

Haiku# Time-1 Comments

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I saw a butterfly floating
In the wind, leapt up to catch
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Valsa George 14 November 2014

Great Haiku! Time slips off our hold!

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Saheb Mohapatra 13 November 2014

no one catch time..........very imaginative..........thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 13 November 2014

butterfly floating, good one. thanks.

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