Haiku - Thoughts Comments

The contrast is well drawn. A good Haiku

The joy of freedom very nicely and so convincingly in the poem...10+

Floating in the sky! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Clouds float in sky and thoughts float in mind. When we write poetry by these thoughts, these unchained thoughts become chained. An excellent thoughtful poem is shared here...10

What a beautiful little cute poem my friend! Loved reading your expression.....10