Haiku - Thoughts Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


unchained thoughts wander
like clouds floating in the sky
river reaches sea

Monday, February 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 05 February 2019

The contrast is well drawn. A good Haiku

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 05 February 2019

The joy of freedom very nicely and so convincingly in the poem...10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2019

Floating in the sky! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 February 2019

Clouds float in sky and thoughts float in mind. When we write poetry by these thoughts, these unchained thoughts become chained. An excellent thoughtful poem is shared here...10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 February 2019

What a beautiful little cute poem my friend! Loved reading your expression.....10

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