Saturday, November 13, 2021

Haiku: The Two Lovers Comments

Rating: 4.0

Only a brick wall
In between; Now, the lovers
turned into magma!
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Pallab Chaudhury
COMMENTS
Russ Kanorr 14 November 2021

I see the melting of one but the wall? ? ?

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 14 November 2021

excellent one my friend.

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David Wood 13 November 2021

a hot love know no bounds and flows and flows. A lovely Haiku.

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