Friday, November 6, 2015

Haiku - The Same Words Comments

Rating: 4.3

Words can be hurtful
The same words can heal as well
Which do you choose now
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Paul Warren
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Tia Attwood 14 February 2016

this poem is a senryu not a haiku, but a very well written senryu written in a 5'7'5 format. great job Regards Tia

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

Wonderful haiku shared of same words. Choosing now is amazing in sharing...10

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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

If healing words can not be spoken, silence is the best option Thanks, Paul

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M Asim Nehal 06 November 2015

A difficult task, tough choice to make....10

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