Saturday, July 31, 2021

Haiku: The Rose Comments

Rating: 4.5

true most beautiful
only one day to enjoy
the firm wind took her
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sandra Feldman 06 September 2021

Movement, Beauty and Sadness, in this lovely Haiku son preciously and unforgettably written.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 August 2021

Beautifully sewn with such heart, sorrow and love! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Luis A. Estable 31 July 2021

This talks of one particular rose. It could not be said of all roses for all would not die in one moment lasting only on day. On day here is problematic. Did the rose live just one day? It had to develop to be one. So more time has to be involved.

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