Saturday, October 10, 2015

Haiku - The Promise Comments

Rating: 4.3

A promise leaves your lips
As it floats to me sweetly
Is it now too late
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Paul Warren
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2015

Deeply envisioned. Really who keeps promise is the best friend or best lover. Nicely presented. Thank you dear Paul for posting such an intensive Haiku. ..... 10

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Nice one, I liked it. If promise is not made on time it will loose its importance well said. I invite u to read my Haikus, Thanks.

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