Wednesday, November 16, 2022

Haiku: The Melting Comments

Rating: 5.0

The soft morning sun
Gently melts the ice and snow
Of the lonely earth.
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David Wood
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Aufie Zophy 17 November 2022

Superb, David. I love these three lines very much. They are amazingly beautiful and sooo full of meaning. Excellent

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Soran M. H 17 November 2022

p1 Simple words and strong and deep feelings. Our inspired poet draws in this haiku and in a calm atmosphere the harmony between the elements of nature in an attractive and poetic scene. However,

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Soran M. H 17 November 2022

p2 However, the semantics of the scene gives dozens of interpretations of possibilities. Here is a soft sun that gently heals the wound of a lonely land, and so the poet is in reality with the afflicted. and the homeless, well done for this geat haiku

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 November 2022

Basically what's happening outside here

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Kim Barney 16 November 2022

Nice haiku, David, but have the sun melt the snow a little faster, will you, please?

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David Wood 17 November 2022

Ha, ha, Kim - Just for you I'll change it. Not quickly as that'll cause a flood, but gently. How's that!

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