The soft morning sun
Gently melts the ice and snow
Of the lonely earth.
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p1 Simple words and strong and deep feelings. Our inspired poet draws in this haiku and in a calm atmosphere the harmony between the elements of nature in an attractive and poetic scene. However,
p2 However, the semantics of the scene gives dozens of interpretations of possibilities. Here is a soft sun that gently heals the wound of a lonely land, and so the poet is in reality with the afflicted. and the homeless, well done for this geat haiku
Nice haiku, David, but have the sun melt the snow a little faster, will you, please?
Ha, ha, Kim - Just for you I'll change it. Not quickly as that'll cause a flood, but gently. How's that!
Superb, David. I love these three lines very much. They are amazingly beautiful and sooo full of meaning. Excellent