Thursday, January 1, 2004

Haiku (The Low Yellow...) Comments

Rating: 3.5

The low yellow
moon above the
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Jack Kerouac
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 October 2021

Comgratulations being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 October 2021

Great haiku verse of the great Jack Kerouac! . I have enjoyed this short poem.5 Stars full

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Britte Ninad 31 March 2019

great writings..............................

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 March 2019

yellow moon slowly as the yolk lit up the body house of monk!

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Jasmine 13 May 2018

Mack it was to sot

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kaitlin s 17 April 2018

this is not a haiku, get it together tf

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havana oonana 27 February 2018

please check your counting this poem is 4,4,5 and a haiku is 5,7,5 thanks bubye

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Lucille rebottom 27 February 2018

ummm this is wrong a haiku is 5 7 5 yours is 4 4 5 smh: (((

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Shaka Moundiessdfjrud 27 February 2018

Umm you did not do this right. This is not how you write a Haiku

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Lucille redbottom 27 February 2018

umm i thought a haiku was 5 7 5, your poem is 4 4 5: ((((((it doesn't make sense

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miranda jones 27 February 2018

THIS IS NOT A HAIKU THIS IS TOTALLY WRONG it is 5 7 5 not 4 4 5

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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018

Beautiful Haiku nicely brought forth.

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David Williamson 20 December 2017

When I Misbehave/ I See Her Mounted On Me/ Asking For A Light

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2016

It is indeed a moon to us, Nice little story of galaxy....

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* Sunprincess * 29 April 2014

..........beautiful imagery...very nice..

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

Lovely haiku's.'short and sweet.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Very nice description. Good

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* Sunprincess * 09 March 2014

......so picture perfect...enjoyed..

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Brilliant! Such a stupendous and sacred moment, only in the Japanese masters can you find. Well, I'm really looking forward on starting one of his beat novels...!

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Max Reif 30 October 2005

I wondered what kind of haiku Kerouac would write. A pretty good one, I find, as an image, at least!

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Jack Kerouac

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