Haiku - The Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - The Life

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ephemeral dunes
paper boat drifting away
clouds moving across

Saturday, September 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 November 2018

(CONT.) 3 - i don't care for symbolism, but i guess the poem must be meant to be symbolic for its topic: life, saying 'life' is ever-changing. maybe senryu aka ‘human haiku’ would be a more appropriate name of the poetic form used. (?) bri (:

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Bri Edwards 26 November 2018

2 - INTERESTINGLY: We have seen that the Oxford English Dictionary contains 171,476 words in current use, whereas a vocabulary of just 3000 words provides coverage for around 95% of common texts. AND I BET i, bri, know at least 150 of them! ! ! ok, there must be over 50-100 different words used in this comment. so maybe i know 200! ! ? (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 26 November 2018

1 - i 'knew' this word, but i did NOT know its definition! : e•phem•er•al /əˈfem(ə) rəl/ adjective adjective: ephemeral 1. lasting for a very short time. fashions are ephemeral synonyms: transitory, transient, fleeting, passing, short-lived, momentary, brief, short; temporary, impermanent, short-term; fly-by-night (CONT.)

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bri edwards 26 November 2018

1 - i 'knew' this word, but i did NOT know its definition! : e•phem•er•al /əˈfem(ə) rəl/ adjective adjective: ephemeral 1. lasting for a very short time. fashions are ephemeral synonyms: transitory, transient, fleeting, passing, short-lived, momentary, brief, short; temporary, impermanent, short-term; fly-by-night (CONT.)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2018

Beautiful haiku on life nicely executed. Thanks for sharing. it

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