Sunday, January 1, 2023

Haiku: The First Dawn Comments

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First dawn of the year;
Sparrows on the drying rope
Are telling their tales!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Rob Lamberton 01 January 2023

Who hung the sparrows out to dry?

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 January 2023

Enjoyed this haiku Happy New Year

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David Wood 01 January 2023

And waiting for food.

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