Sunday, November 13, 2022
Haiku: The Avenue Tree Comments
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Grounded by the storm;
By now, people are with saws
To make the road clear!
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David Wood
13 November 2022
Middle line 8 syllables, perhaps "People with big power saw" may work? ?
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Pallab Chaudhury
13 November 2022
Thank you for the observation made... Here is the reviewed one...With best wishes/PC
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8/1/2025 7:13:01 AM # 1.0.0
Tree- the shelter of passerby but now the avenue!