Haiku: The Avenue Tree Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Haiku: The Avenue Tree

Rating: 5.0


Grounded by the storm;
By now, people are with saws
To make the road clear!

Dated: 13th Nov 2022.




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 14 November 2022

Tree- the shelter of passerby but now the avenue!

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David Wood 13 November 2022

Middle line 8 syllables, perhaps "People with big power saw" may work? ?

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Pallab Chaudhury 13 November 2022

Thank you for the observation made... Here is the reviewed one...With best wishes/PC

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