Friday, September 8, 2017

Haiku: Talk Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tongue, in dance
Vibrates the air molecule
To run as a wave.
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Rob Lamberton 24 December 2022

Physics in a poem, poem physics. Like it! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 August 2022

Fabulous haiku penned with such powerful expression. Brilliant Pallab! ...10 + To my Favourites

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

Another beautiful poem my very dear Pallua, thanks for sharing!

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 February 2022

The dance of the tongue and the song of the mind, dear poet. Loved it..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 February 2022

Truly an excellent haiku, dear Pallab, most appreciated and such a pleasant read 5 Stars full on-TOP again Between brackets, on line 1 you missed one syllable. Humble suggestion, the word 'When' fits in

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Anjandev Roy 04 January 2021

Brilliant.....

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 February 2022

Thank you my dear...

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excellent piece of writing........10++

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 August 2020

Thank you so much for the very positive feedback... Stay safe. With best wishes pc

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Expiallidocious 07 January 2020

Nice just a vibration nothing else

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Pallab Chaudhury 11 February 2020

Yes. Either good or bad, but it propagates as a vibration. Thank you for your comments and views.

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

Another nice and simple inages that pack punch. Keep writing it is beautiful

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Pallab Chaudhury 09 September 2019

Thank you so much for the encouraging words... With best wishes pc

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2018

Talk simplified...well thought.10++++++

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 November 2018

Thank you very much for your very positive feed back. With best wishes. pc

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Short but significant sentences!

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Pallab Chaudhury 25 August 2018

A very positive feedback from you... Thank you so much.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2018

A wonderful scientific poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 07 April 2018

You have inspired me. Thanking you a lot for your kind visit to the e-page. With regards. Pallab Chaudhury.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2017

The powerful talk has been expressed superbly through a powerful few words emanating from tongue.. excellent Haiku.. Enjoyed

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Pallab Chaudhury 11 November 2017

Nice to have this comment. Thank you Dr. Swain. With best wishes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

With the muse of the truth! ! Facing life. Thanks for sharing.

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 September 2017

Thank you so much for sharing your views. All the best.

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Rajnish Manga 08 September 2017

How well the whole concept has been expressed. Loved it. Thanks.

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Pallab Chaudhury 08 September 2017

Happy to see your valuable comment on the haiku. With regards.

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 February 2022

Thank you so much for the encouraging words..

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Rini Shibu 08 September 2017

In short you illustrated the talk..10

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Pallab Chaudhury 08 September 2017

Nice to have a comment from you poet Rini Jerry. With thanks.

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