Haiku. Sunset (5-7-5) Comments

A beautiful haiku on sunset nicely executed. Poem is brief but its boundary of feeling is vast.

p.s. valsa, you might like my poem, just 15th street. -glen

i like this, valsa! good imagination. -glen

Wow... that's a wonderful haiku painted by a sun....... Loved it.

What a delightful way to show the sudden burst of colors we so love at sunset. To think the lordly sun can be just as clumsy as we humans is reassuring! Even the great ones can have accidents - and what wonders result from some of them!

Beautiful. Twilight witness for being relinquished from days toil. Sun also witness the same. Thanks for share. Regards.

Color permeates at sunset when sun tips over. Beautiful haiku. Thank you.

A vivid and artful picture you've painted. Very creative Valsa.

The sun setting like a paint bottle turning upside down that permeates the colour of burning red has never been in any haiku like this! A wonderful write madam Valsa.

And so is heart, the pail of love, when upturned the universal love permeates and the world becomes a work of art. 100 out of 10.

Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!

Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!

Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!

a beautiful haiku, a painting with words.

Sunset well captured in this haiku......Valsa......great imagery

Great imagery presented in this haiku. Can be related to dusk or dawn when sky the painted at its best at the time of setting and rising sun. Happy writing.

I like the paint, thanks,