Haiku- Summer Comments
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A reading of the poem makes me feel the boiling heat of summer on the earth and the celestial beauty up in the sky
Respecting the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
awesome description of summer Mam, described so much in few words. loved it!
Brilliant write, I felt I was there in summer on that steaming tarmac road as I read your vivid Haiku!
Awesome. Great descriptive skill displayed here. The reader can actually feel the summer heat.
Summers are always beautiful to me for some strange reasons.. Maybe just the afternoon's silence, that is wonderful.. A wonderful haiku Valsa ma'am.. Thank you for sharing..
Ooooh! Steaming tarmac....Reddened sun.... tr bright blue sky....! You make us feel the heat of summer. Excellent.
When I think of the tarmac, with undulating hot air distorting the vista, it makes me appreciate winter a little more.: -)
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7/27/2025 10:13:22 AM # 1.0.0
The imagery used is astounding and greatly reminiscent of rich summer. However, I believe the second line only has 6 syllables. Saf-fire (2) sky(1) fleck-d (1) with (1) clou-ds (1) .