Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Haiku- Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Haiku- Summer
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During summer
Even the sun enjoys rains
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2018

Even the sun enjoys rains..... the porospect that even the sun enjoys the rain is a fine concept and well found imagination..... thank u for this very good poem dear Deepak..Kumar.. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

Imagining sun enjoying the rains is a lovely poetic idea, yes, I have seen the sun loving the clouds and sometimes peeping out as a satisfied and content lover. A great Haiku.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 April 2018

A contrasting weather in a lovely short write. A great poem in its simplicity.10

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Rajnish Manga 17 February 2018

The poem has beautifully captured the impact of scorching heat on an extreme summer day. And even the thought of rain brings solace to the heart. Thanks, Deepak ji.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 February 2018

Many many thanks Rajnishji I am very much inspired

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2017

Beautiful haiku on sun, summer and rain in a concise form. Loved reading it. Thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 December 2017

Many many thanks......kumarmaniji.......i am humbled

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Akhtar Jawad 01 November 2017

When the sun enjoys rains, what a beautiful scenery.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 November 2017

Many many thanks........Akhtar.........I am humbled

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Rich in realism. Even givers like the son needs to receive from time to time.

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Bri Edwards 16 March 2015

i like it. :) bri ok, i need more characters to submit comment; this should be enough!

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Priyanka Gupta 04 December 2014

Right...lovely haiku poem.. 'During summer Even the sun enjoys rains Here and there'

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Patricia Grantham 08 November 2014

This is very sweet. The burning sun deserves a break also. Cool poem.

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Salini Nair 04 September 2014

sometimes very true..................nice haiku...........like it

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Valsa George 04 September 2014

True.... the sun may be tired of his burning heat and looking for a shower!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 September 2014

that's a lovely one, very cute.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 03 September 2014

Summer beautiful expressions but too short poem but interested.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 September 2014

Short and sweet Haiku. Loved reading it.

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