Haiku. Streams (5-7-5) Comments

Brilliant Haiku on stream is amazingly shared with beautiful graphic. Thanks for sharing.

Quite beautiful Valsa slap one more syllable into L3 and perfect great picture

Nicely painted. Enjoyed with photo provided.Thanks for sharing.

I can feel the lovely maidens walking as the stream flows.

to put all of nature in three sentences and feel it - that is beautiful.

Streams of water are dancing girls and the silver anklets are the white lather/sliding down of molten ice. Excellent. . The third line, rushing down the slopes has 5 syllables showing a live picture.

jingling silver anklets What a beautiful metaphor! I can hear the sound. Amazing one.

Potential when it wonderful and the narrative haiku, a rare specimen, thanks Valsa.

A perfect description, a perfect haiku!

I can hear the anklets against the babbling of the stream Thanks Valsa-10

Looks like a gushing stream has taken over the form of an heavenly muse to mesmerize the entire valley where it flows. A touch of our great poet Kalidasa. Thanks.

Nice picture painted with this haiku, great imagery yet again.