Wednesday, October 13, 2021

Haiku: So Very Darkest! Comments

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this morn much worry
was dark, darker, and darkest
of course, was still night!
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

of course, was still night!

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

part1 Here the poet's philosophy is based on the perceptible of clarity and darkness, but it is psychological expressions of the poet's moment she lived, because we all know that after the night comes the day, hope and happiness,

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

part2/ and at the end night and day are two forms that the poet has used them in the right place, well done and thanks for sharing this unique haiku

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