Monday, August 30, 2021

Haiku - Silence Is Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

beneath cloudy sky
ducks are splashing in the lake
silence is broken
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 01 September 2021

What a way to break the silence.

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2021

Thank you for a pleasant moment. Good Haiku, carries one away.

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2021

A welcoming sound, In a world that's so fake!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 August 2021

Beautifully done! Encore! Encore!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 August 2021

Top stars for this Haiku so rich and insightful.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 August 2021

The journey from silence to sound.....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 August 2021

Marvellous Haiku Asim ji!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 August 2021

So serene, vibrant and vivid, rich in scenery and sound.5 stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2021

I have read with greatest pleasure this Haiku with much sound.5 Stars full for your unique haiku, dear Asim sir!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2021

I can hear the splashing and quacking of ducks. Wonderful haiku adorned with great images. Well crafted write.

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Martinez Salotori 30 August 2021

Silence is broken. Loved it 5***

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Zoyza Da Vinka 30 August 2021

Wonderful poem. beneath cloudy sky ducks are splashing in the lake silence is broken

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Juhaina Tumlu 30 August 2021

Fabulous imagery in three lines, I liked your haiku.

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M. Asim Nehal

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