Thursday, November 13, 2014

Haiku 'shoe' Comments

Rating: 4.5

My untied shoe-lace

following reluctantly-
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miken newman
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Heather Wilkins 13 November 2014

a good haiku a shoe lace and sisers pigtail interesting good writing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2014

Beautiful haiku poem with purposeful realization shared on the desk. Nice job.

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