Saturday, May 31, 2008

Haiku- She Comments

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On lips smile alive
On her bright fun loving eyes
Tears never thrive!
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Kingsley Egbukole 18 November 2023

Lively and happy lady. Well captured

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 November 2023

Excellent haiku TFS Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2023

This is a brilliant haiku....

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Rob Lamberton 09 February 2023

Such an optimistic gal! I like her already. Thanks for the introduction!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2022

A wonderful haiku so adoringly expressed. Top score.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2020

A beautiful haiku that captures happiness. Yes, tears never thrive in a person who has full of love. Brilliantly penned.

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Nicely done! Though shedding tears can be renewing!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 March 2010

Wow what a piece! ! Beyond spatial but sprite… Hats off Sir [uncountable tens –niv] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 08 December 2009

a very delightful piece...............................

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 05 November 2009

A strong, vivid and eloquent haiku.10

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Smiley Hooker 19 July 2009

This is quite charming, my friend. Gives a positive energy while reading. Thanks for sharing: -)

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a lovely piece...brings the picture to mind

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Sandra Martyres 08 April 2009

A delightful haiku Kesav sweetly told - with the additional bonus of rhyme.10++++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 February 2009

Traditional poets say that rhyming is not necessary in a haiku. B ut when rhymed the beautiful effect it gets is immense. This haiku is a genuine example

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

so sweet....sweet write she looks so charming and beautiful.. fiery lips and smiling eyes....beautiful image...tempting i love this..10+++++++++++++ and goes to my fave

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Anjali Sinha 11 January 2009

externally shes goodlooking internally lovlier than you can imagine -10 anjali

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2009

She is always like that, very good haiku.Thanks for sharing.

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Gauri Gupta 22 December 2008

Beautifully written.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 November 2008

beautiful definition of your 'she'... :)

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Mamta Agarwal 20 October 2008

a nice portrait of a vivacious -she who never dwells on sorrow.10

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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