On lips smile alive
On her bright fun loving eyes
Tears never thrive!
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Such an optimistic gal! I like her already. Thanks for the introduction!
A beautiful haiku that captures happiness. Yes, tears never thrive in a person who has full of love. Brilliantly penned.
Wow what a piece! ! Beyond spatial but sprite… Hats off Sir [uncountable tens –niv] Ms. Nivedita UK
a very delightful piece...............................
This is quite charming, my friend. Gives a positive energy while reading. Thanks for sharing: -)
A delightful haiku Kesav sweetly told - with the additional bonus of rhyme.10++++
Traditional poets say that rhyming is not necessary in a haiku. B ut when rhymed the beautiful effect it gets is immense. This haiku is a genuine example
so sweet....sweet write she looks so charming and beautiful.. fiery lips and smiling eyes....beautiful image...tempting i love this..10+++++++++++++ and goes to my fave
externally shes goodlooking internally lovlier than you can imagine -10 anjali
a nice portrait of a vivacious -she who never dwells on sorrow.10
Lively and happy lady. Well captured