Saturday, November 3, 2007

(haiku) Seven Sins - Pride Comments

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K. Jared Hosein
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Tom J. Mariani 03 November 2007

Your poem sharpens the definition of pride and then has it fall on its own sword. Your Haikus show the hard word you have done to compress excellent thoughts into a tight space.

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K. Jared Hosein

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Trinidad and Tobago, West Indies.
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