Haiku- Series 2 Adjustments Comments
wet heart in the rain
silence was chosen prison
for a caged bird.
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Your poetic finesse is illustrated beautifully. Always a pleasure to read you.
We must learn from the little dew drop. A person who can adjust with people, places and surroundings can survive in all climatic conditions. A brilliant poem.
One of yr best My friend Bravo Top5 Kudos and give us an Encore
A pair of great Haiku's. Silence in indeed a prison every songbird should escape from.
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9/16/2025 7:08:53 PM # 1.0.0
‘Silence was chosen prison.." good metaphor. Nice poem. Loved